1.16雅思考試大作文金長麟老師解析及範文

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相似題目參考資料和段落Advantagesand disadvantages of living in a dorm The dormitory is a common housing option for private schoolchildren, university s

2020.1.16大陸雅思大作文原題

With growing population in cities, more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Positive or negative development?


今天大作文考了一個城市管理類和社會類的討論題目,就是2017年10月5號澳洲卷的原題,這個題目在過去的5年當中沒有在中國大陸地區出現過,我們往往在中國大陸地區考到的相似類的題目,就是討論年輕人願不願意在家裡跟父母居住,以及人們住到更遠的地方,還有人們搬到城裡單獨居住等等相關話題。


今天這個題目一定要注意,他是問人們越來越多的住在小房子或者沒有戶外的院子房子裡面這件事情的優缺點也就是說這個題目並沒有討論人們為什麼會搬到更小的房子或者沒有戶外,沒有院子的房子去居住的原因,因此在這篇文章中,如果有較大的篇幅和段落在描寫成因而不是在討論利弊,那就偏離了中心,這個會對得分有很大程度的影響。


利弊關係在這個題目里其實還是很容易理解的,住小房子的很多優點,比如像更容易管理,然後節省了很多做家務的時間,節省了成本,更符合現代人生活的一種需求,以及社會節奏的狀態,我們都是可以寫的,但是缺點也很明顯,比如家裡的人員不斷在變大,他可能往往只能夠居住一個人或者夫妻,但很難去融入一家人,沒有更多的去感受到家庭的這種氛圍,沒有更多的活動空間,啊有的人會說沒有院子之後有很多戶外活動不能做啊,但是你會發現它不是城市化在往前進的一種趨勢,城市化的趨勢一定是房子越變越小,所以這個題目大家選中立是一種寫法傾向,說利弊皆有的情況之下,它帶來更多的好處,更符合城市的發展也是一種方向。

住小房子的優點


1、生活中更省錢。

在你的觀念中如果你想過著簡單的生活,在自己的居室內不需要太多的家居用品,電子電器用來填充房間,只需要一些生活必需品。這樣你就能節省更多的消費,把這些錢更好的花在你感興趣的地方。

2、生活中更享受

許多生活在大房子的人都同意,大房子會有更大的壓力去進行家具清潔保養。如果沒有足夠的經濟能力時,大房子也會造成家庭生活的緊張。住在適當的一個小房子,你的生活會更加的輕鬆,你會有更多的時間用於休閒活動,陪伴家人和更多享受時間。

3、家庭生活更幸福

住一個小房子時一家人會為了一些事情更好的組織、溝通處理。比如生活中的某些安排,共用廁所的使用,都會在生活中讓人感到一些溫馨的存在。

4、生活中更節省能源

大房子大家都知道各種設備一應俱全,在能源消耗方面是個大胖子。在浴室、廚房使用冷熱水時的能源消耗要比小房子大的多。小房子在這方面的消耗會更加的高效節能。

5、更好的出行旅遊

大房子一般都是獨立在某個地域,當你需要旅行時,大房子的安全監控系統一般都無法保障家裡的安全,這時就會成為旅行的負擔。如果你住在一個小房子,周圍鄰居是可以幫你照看房子的。你可以在旅行時減少不必要一些麻煩,更加輕鬆的旅遊。

6、發揮你室內設計的創意

當你的空間受到限制時,你會想方設法在節省空間上發揮你的創意,讓你的房間不會因空間受到限制而影響房間的方便和美觀。在縮小空間上,很多家具是可以設計成摺疊形式,在不需要使用時可以縮小摺疊在某個角落。


相似題目參考資料和段落

Advantages and disadvantages of living in a dorm

The dormitory is a common housing option for private schoolchildren, university students and those who stay in hostels. University and school dormitory buildings are located on campus and usually provide furnished rooms, bathrooms and sometimes a dining hall for a large number of students. Many students opt for this middle ground between living at home with their parents and living on their own, particularly during their first year of higher education. There are both advantages and disadvantages that go along with dorm life.

Companionship

Starting off at a new school or uni can be a challenge, and any difficult situation is easier when you have companionship. One main advantage of living in a dorm is that you are surrounded by companions. Your room-mates and neighbours are other students who are generally the same age, going through similar adjustments and dealing with similar pressures in their academic and social lives. They are an excellent support system, and many become lifelong friends.

Privacy issues

Constant companionship in your living space can sometimes be a disadvantage, especially in situations when you want privacy. If you are accustomed to living in your own room at your parents' house and suddenly have to share a room with others, this can take some adjustment time. If you need some alone time and your roomy is there, try checking out another place in the dorm, such as a lounge or the launderette. You also can ask your roommate about her schedule and plan to spend time alone in the room while she is busy in class.

Convenience

Convenience is another huge advantage of living in a dorm. Dorms are located on campus, so they are close to your classes. On most school or college campuses, you can walk to academic buildings and the library from your dorm room. This saves you time as well as money on bus fares. Additionally, it is convenient for you to meet with other people from your classes if they live in your dorm or another dorm on campus. If you have a group project or a lab partner, meeting in a dorm lounge is convenient and easy.

Noise

Dorms can be noisy places. Often you may find yourself contributing to the noise as you study with your friends in the lounge, gather in a friend's room or listen to music. Unfortunately, sometimes you are trying to study or sleep in your dorm and may prefer quiet over a ruckus. In these situations, be sure to have earplugs or noise-blocking headphones handy. Listening to music with earphones also may drown out noisy situations.

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